Engineering Graduate School Essay Critique

College Essays
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<p>Can someone critique my two engineering graduate school essays? I have 2 essays: One is my personal statement(700 words) and the other is my statement of purpose(830 words). </p>

<p>I am in the field of civil engineering (structures) so someone familiar with that would be preferable (otherwise it might not make much sense)</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look. I’m pretty good with math and science, and my math prof used to be a structural engineer, so I know the basics of it.</p>