Essay feedback request

  1. What colleges are you likely to apply to?
    Babson, Wharton, Stanford, Berkeley, ASU
  2. Why do you want help? or What kind of help are you seeking?

I’m looking for a deep essay evaluation and insightful tips on how to make it better.

  1. Do you have a due date by which you need to receive feedback? Please specify if yes.

No, I don’t have a specific due date.

  1. Please copy and paste the PROMPT for the essay and the word count here. (If you are unsure of your prompt for the Common App Personal statement, please indicate that.)

Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.

  1. Did you previously work with a CC reader? or **Do you have a preference for an [Essay Reader]

No, I haven’t and I do not have a preference for an essay reader.

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@Mihawii, not sure if you still need help, but if yes, please follow these steps and post your feedback in the appropriate forum.