Expert with admissions experience ready to read essays

<p>Hey, I’m applying early decision to Brown. I just submitted my essay on <a href=“http://www.story2.com”>www.story2.com</a> and got amazing feedback from a former Brown admissions officer. </p>

<p>If you register and submit your essay by October 15th you get credit for one round of review by their admissions experts. So worth it! </p>

<p>Wow! That’s pretty awesome. </p>

<p>Pretty cool. I had signed up for this awhile ago and they’ve added a ton of features. I just noticed that the credit for free feedback ends on October 15th, so if you want to get it, you need to sign up soon. </p>

<p>The feedback I got was much more thorough than my English teacher and what was great is that my instructor actually had admissions experience, so I knew I could trust the advice. </p>

<p>Yeah I posted the story I recorded on <a href=“http://www.story2.com”>www.story2.com</a> in this forum a couple weeks ago. The process was helpful and I got great feedback! </p>

<p>I’m glad other people had a similar experience. I felt I had to share this. :)) </p>

<p>So I’m not sure if this is the right forum but I am preparing my personal statement for universities and am wondering just how personal I should get. I come from a very unstable past of substance abuse and incarceration both personally and within my family. Are there certain things I should be cryptic about or should I just put it all out there? Thoughts…</p>

<p>This looks legit.</p>

<p>I signed up with the code OCT2014, and now I’m not sure how to redeem my feedback credit. Anyone care to help?</p>

<p>You can summit at the end once you go through all of the steps.</p>