Feedback on my CA background essay!

<p>I’ve been lurking CC for quite some time and finally needed to make an account to get some feedback on my essay. Admissions officers will not know who I am at all so I think it’s really important to get some feedback from a stranger. If any current college student or adult with prior posts that confirm this is willing to help I would be forever grateful, thanks! </p>

<p>Bump! Really need some last minute feedback!</p>

<p>I am willing</p>