How nit picky do you want us to be? In my opinion, all of the colleges sound the same.
Every school says:
Interested in music or performing? At XYZ you can join a campus band, sing in a chorus, or perform with one of the school’s theater groups.
Interested in journalism or communications? XYZ students can write for the campus newspaper, host a radio show or be a producer for the student-run television channel.
Excited for Greek life? XYZ has both fraternities and sororities.
Planning to play sports? XYZ has many options for athletes. See them all and learn more about life at XYZ on the Student Life page.
For the UCs, the following section is painfully generic. While each UC looks for different attributes in an applicant, you should, at a minimum, link to the 13 Criteria the UCs use to review applications.
What Does UCXX Look For in an Applicant?
Colleges consider a range of factors when deciding who to admit for their next incoming class. Each college determines which factors are are most important in the admissions process. When creating your list of schools to apply to, you may want to consider your strengths and any possible weaknesses in your application, and apply to colleges that prioritize the areas where you stand out.
Other than the boxes with the check marks, the Student Life section is the same for all 9 UCs. Student Life at UCLA is very different than student life at Santa Cruz. Student life at UC Irvine is very different than student life at UC Davis. Some kids want to go to a school with football. Why is that not listed for UCLA, Berkeley and Davis?