Much of this ensues beyond the known audiovisual periphery; and thus goes untold of. All the same, it is a critically important encumbrance that can profoundly traumatize many youths of our age. If you are ever a suspecting observer, open your eyes to it and pull down the masked curtain… to act in an ethically genuine demeanor. Feel free to add statistical validation and a witness attestation on how to help expeditiously circumvent this, and to positively facilitate such goals.
Important subject matter but your post might read better if you didn’t use all your SAT words. It also doesn’t belong in this forum which is for parents to discuss college related issues.
In your posting history, you asked if it was OK to be a thesaurus Nazi. it’s not. Regardless of the worthiness of your topic (albeit obvious), you should seek to communicate ideas. Instead, your writing is cringe-inducing.
I think there might be an interesting topic for discussion here, but I can’t figure out what the heck it is, and I write for a living.
Could you restate your original post in plain English?
That’s an awkward phrase.
I would assign an “F” to your post. It is just poorly written. Writing is a form of communication. If you have not conveyed your ideas clearly you have failed. Being succinct and clear helps the reader to understand what you are trying to communicate. If your post is important to you, I’d re-word it and post again.
This thread belongs in the “Most Annoying Threads” thread! 
I don’t think you are supposed to ask for homework help here, and thus, sadly, you are unlikely to get many statistics to add to your term paper from this crowd.
Well, one of my beefs with the paragraph is that it begins, "Much of this . . . " There is no antecedent for “this.”
“Profoundly traumatize”: Redundant.
“Many youths of our age”: Ambiguous. Is this, many youths who are as old as we are? Or is this, youths of today?
“Open your eyes to it and pull down the masked curtain”: Mixed metaphor.
“Ethically genuine”: What in the world is that?
“Circumvent”: You mean, eliminate?
“To positively facilitate such goals”: What goals? Is there an antecedent?
Seriously, I’d give this a D-.
DId you post here to ask a question? I’m not sure what the goal of this post is.
Phantombrain, there was a poster on here years ago whose name was Mifune. He had the same, overblown, cram-in-every-SAT-word-I-can approach to writing as you do. It was pretty evident that other students were making fun of him. I would urge you to write in a more concise fashion. For example, in your posting history, you referred to your mother as your “maternal parent.” Whatever for? Just say mother.
There is simply no need to use longer words when shorter ones will do. It’s not a hallmark of good writing; indeed, it’s quite the opposite.
Your paragraph could have been just as easily stated as follows:
Most child abuse isn’t directly observed, but it can have a horrific effect on a child’s life. If you think you’ve seen something that points to a child being abused, do the right thing and do something about it. If you have tips on how to do so, please post them.
None of your flowery words added any appreciable content to what I’ve said above.
Computer translation? Extraterrestrial? >-)
Jokester?
I clicked on this thread in the hopes that I’d be linked to an article about recognizing child abuse. Instead I’m basically told to be a good person? Thanks, but that already occurred to me.
As someone who has worked in partner and child abuse, I was hoping this would not be a legitimate thread (as I hoped someone wasn’t working with a child s/he expected of being abused).
Luckily, it seems that it is not.