Motivation letter for an International business administration bachelor in the Netherlands

Hi,
I’m French and I’m applying to a very selective program in the Netherlands at the Rotterdam school of management.
I’d be very very very glad if anyone could correct my letter…

this is the informations :

You should include the following: details of your international background or experience (if applicable); your reasons for applying to an international, English-language business programme (IBA), your reasons for applying to Rotterdam School of Management, Erasmus University (RSM) and your future career plans.

If you could correct it for me, please tell me and I’ll send you the letter in private message !

Thank you !

You should ask in the international students forum…

Also try in the essay session…they have more people willing to review essays.

It’s ok, thank you ! It is true that the essay section is probably more relevant !