Personal Statement Essay Readers

Hey Guys!

Would any of you guys be willing to read my Personal Statement for UCAS schools? My counselors and teachers have no clue about the statement. Thanks!

Schools Applying to:

University of Birmingham: Economics
University of Edinburgh: Finance and Business
King’s College: Economics and Management
London School of Economics: Finance
University College London (UCL): Economics

I suggest that you check it against advice on the student room website, a UK site with a lot of good information. You may also wish to read the BBC UK website, which under the Family and Education header in the news section has some good advice in this article: University admissions: The art of the personal statement. Web address http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/education-41761824 . Sorry, but being several years distant from my own offsprings applications I will not offer to be a reader for you. Good luck with your application.

Thank You!

I also suggest showing this page to your counselor

https://www.ucas.com/advisers/references