Personal Statement Help and Feedback!

Applying to College
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  1. What colleges are you likely to apply to?
    Oregon State University, Portland State University

  2. Why do you want help? or What kind of help are you seeking?
    Looking for essay feedback and ways I can improve it.

  3. Do you have a due date by which you need to receive feedback? Please specify if yes.
    Yes. By November 3rd

  4. Please copy and paste the PROMPT for the essay and the word count here. (If you are unsure of your prompt for the Common App Personal statement, please indicate that.)
    Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others.

  5. Did you previously work with a CC reader? Please @ tag them here if yes. No