The other thing is that you presented his ECs as resume lines. It doesn’t begin to give an idea how directly he was involved in healthcare delivery. Eg, documenting is taking notes, not ‘caring for…’ It doesn’t convey how he has experienced the needs, practices, and challenges in being a med profesional, working directly with patients. I’m sorry if this sounds harsh, but it sounds a bit distanced, not one-on-one with patients.