Hello! I am looking to apply for instate colleges in Georgia. The ones I want to do are University of Georgia and Georgia Tech. Emory is also on that list. I want to see if a reader can spot any parts that need improvement. The word count is 800 words and the prompt is: Describe a significant personal experience or series of experiences that have shaped your career aspirations and personal development. This essay is due on September 26th, but I am submitting it on the the 23rd.
Please follow the directions here: STUDENTS, Need Help w/ Your College Essays? Get Community Feedback Now