short story about my first friday of high school

<p>“So hit him in the head with the stick and lets rob him” Jd whispered to us. My heart fluttered in my chest I really didn’t want to do this. I was very strongly opposed to hitting a little Asian guy in the head with a stick and robbing him so that we could buy weed. The plan was very simple we were walking up a long deserted back road hill. We were gonna rob the guy in front of us and run back down the hill. The thing is I didn’t want to do it. I was scared what if we got caught? I didn’t want a record. The guys I was with there parents didn’t care. There parents knew there kids were criminals and didn’t care. But my dad would literally slit my throat if he found out I was out robbing people when I could just ask him for money. He always talked about how he had a tough life so I could have a good one. I wanted to walk away and I knew it wasn’t too late. But I also knew I wasn’t gonna walk away. All through middle school I had been a loner with 0 friends. Now I was a popular football player a tough guy and I wouldn’t give that up for anything. Even if it meant me getting sent to juvie or getting suspended. I would go through hell and high water to keep my status as a cool kid.
“Hey fob gimmi your money” dale rasped in a fake deep voice. The asian broke out into a run. He wasn’t fast I could catch him in a second. We all could we had spent the past week sprinting our butts up this same hill for football and it would be nothing to us. So we took off after him I wasn’t giving it my all though. When they asked me later I would say it was hard to run in my jeans. But I was praying to god we wouldn’t catch this poor guy. I looked around me and they were all jogging. They weren’t running hard at all.
“He wasn’t even worth it bro he probably didn’t even have any money right?” Jd said with false confidence but I had known him all through middle school we hadn’t been friends but I knew when he was scared. He was scared now. It turned out we all were scared. We all agreed that he was probably poor and laughed about how he had ran. Saying he was just a punk. And about how we would have fought off anyone who tried to rob us. No matter how many there were. But I knew we were all lying. We were fakers and posers. Maybe the next time I am in that position I will have the strength to stand up and say what we are doing is wrong. But probably not because in the end I am weak. Maybe not physically but in a different way, a way that I can’t put into words. But yea in the end when its all said and done that guy had more balls then all of us put together.</p>

<p>Be honest tell me what you think. I know the grammar isn’t very good. This is a true story i changed a couple things to remain unknown but thats it.</p>

<p>5/5</p>

<p>Would read again.</p>

<p>ummmm wat? lol</p>

<p>Grammar errors aside, I found this pretty entertaining. You should keep writing.</p>

<p>Yea i seriously suck when it comes to grammar. Guess i should have payed attention from kindergarten through 9th grade.</p>

<p>This is so offensive, I don’t even know where to begin.</p>

<p>How is this offensive?</p>

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<p>You could have referred to him as “the man we tried to rob,” rather than “the Asian.” People are more than just their skin color, and you could have at least capitalized Asian.</p>

<p>Lol if i knew the guys name i would have put that. The original story was much longer and its easier to put asian as his name then it is to put the guy we tried to rob. The fob thing is exactly what he said minus the explicits. And i was describing the guy if he was mexican i would have said little mexican if he was white i would have said little white guy. I have nothing against asians. Sorry if it offended you.</p>

<p>^^I didn’t find it offensive. You’re probably Asian.</p>

<p>My ethnicity is irrelevant here. I am not offended by the mere mentioning of “Asian,” but rather how the OP used it. Actually, I’m a bit offended that you jumped to the conclusion that I am Asian with the assumption that all Asians are easily offended.</p>

<p>Wow, get over it lol.</p>

<p>^You’re probably white, eh?</p>

<p>seewhatididthere?</p>

<p>Lol i think everyone who read your comments assumed you were asian. But you know what they say about assuming. Honestly im sorry to all asians and anyone else who i offended. I was just telling the events as they happened.</p>

<p>^^ Fail</p>

<p>I’m Asian and I didn’t find it at all offensive by how the OP referred to the guy like that.</p>

<p>Good story :)</p>

<p>I hate how people jump to conclusions</p>

<p>How do i fail harvey?</p>

<p>^ He was referring to Spatula.</p>

<p>oh now i actually do fail lol.</p>