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<p>that’s the beauty of music, art, literature, etc. to each one his own.</p>
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<p>anything can be a metaphor. that’s the beauty of it. </p>
<p>and waiting to do your essays last minute is no excuse. I wrote mine December 31st because I was out of town the next few days but I still paid attention to what I wrote. Don’t procrastinate unless you work well under pressure.</p>
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<p>gahh why didn’t you write this!?! it would have made a much better essay! you had the perfect concept but I think you discarded the idea because you thought it made no sense. I would have much rather read an essay about you walking through the market covered with the pre dawn dew as the music playing in your head. Or better yet, you could have made a simile with all of the sounds in the music piece with the sounds of the day. For example, the light patter of the bass drum echoed my footsteps down the seven flights of stairs into the calm, dark street. The quiet and simple thoughts gently flowing through my mind sounded like the crescendo of the clarinet as it flowed through the higher register. </p>
<p>You don’t need a metaphor for this. The simple yet elegant details of your walk through the market for school and its relation to the piece would have been enough to show how it affected you: it brings back sweet memories of a past time that brought calm and peace before a hectic day. ** write what you know best. ** you had the concept; you just dismissed it too easily.</p>
<p>now, I have a 3 page paper to write about the byronic hero in an hour. I’ll look at your other essay later on today. :)</p>