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I see, Please Delete later.
That’s also not happening. We don’t delete posts on request, although I did delete your essays since you shouldn’t be posting those. Although to be frank, they were of a quality that you should have ni fear of anybody plagiarizing them
I hope you understand that your applications are reviewed based on what you did include. From what you are writing here, it sounds like some info was not included in your application and the admissions folks determined that the school(s) could not accept you. Once that happens, you can’t then go back and add the missing parts.
If your TOEFL was too old, you needed to retake it.
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I see, then hold on.
Never post an essay on a public site as you can run afoul of plagiarism checkers.
If this is the essay you submitted, it is not well written, not properly capitalized, nor punctuated.
IMO, based on your ability to communicate in written form in English, US universities are not going to be a good fit for you.
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this is My original Script I got award from English Literature (long time ago), You can confirm any similar article you can not find on online
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Capitalization, as above My Comment, I have accustomed to read and write Middle German and pre modern English- Especially Bible, Kind of problem happened.
Did you write your college essays that way?
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Bibles Reading, Another way to escape from Pain, Honestly.
This.
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I didn’t address above Article, Because Award didn’t remain based by this past Article, I applied Major: American history.
Please undertand, Recently I am trying to correct this Capitalization; Latin and some old contents, I have been reading long time- Alone by Medical Treatment.
One more comment. Even with a perfect application (and yours is not) the acceptance %age for international students at Berkeley is teeny. So your likelihood of acceptance there was beyond small anyway.
Hoping you have some affordable colleges in your home country.
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We understand, but you will NOT be able to successfully complete courses taught in English. Especially ones where you need to be able to write.
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You don’t learn standard American English by reading. Sorry, that’s only part of the equation.
And if you have medical issues, as you imply, you need to get those resolved FIRST. Before any college enrollment.
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In High School Time, Not only Mathematics Course for olympiad, also I got heard an English Literature in Universities
Again, your poor English language usage makes it impossible for us to understand what this even mean!
OK…free advice. Berkeley is a no go. So forget about it. Forget about any interactions you have had with admissions. You won’t be going there. So…you need realistic other colleges. And you need a current TOEFL score.
Just simple English I wrote down, It is something wrong? ( might be wording by very old Form, I think…)
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as be~ Past tense~, by , or addressed from First~ Too old form.