First, I would not have written an opinion attacking UVA and its venerable history. Second, if the point of the article is the perfect storm of bad publicity, I would have stated that the incident raises unanswered questions as to how students are treated at UVA, including whether the ABC officers used excessive force. And third, I would have used the piece to defend UVA and discount the alleged rape incident by demonstrating how a poorly reported story contributed to the perfect storm.