Demographics
- International student from Maharashtra, India
- Spent all of middle and high school at an alternative residential school part of the Krishnamurthi Foundation. Focus on non-competitive learning, small size, accessible teachers (basically the LAC version of high schools).
- Male, Indian (Marathi)
- I took a gap year. That is, I completed HS in March 2023, applying to college for Fall 2024.
Intended Major(s)
- Cognitive Science
- Computer Science (where CogSci is not available)
- Philosophy
- Neuroscience
- Psychology
GPA, Rank, and Test Scores
- HS Scores: 93%, 96%, 86%, 97% in 9th, 10th, 11th and 12th grade respectively.
- National CISCE Board
- No equivalent to US-style GPA, just percentage aggregates
- Class Rank: 1/44, but my school doesnât report rank in transcript.
- ACT: 2 attempts, 34 and 33 respectively with 11/12 in writing (superscore: 35)
Coursework
- (Extra) Electives in 9th and 10th grade: Economics, Marathi (Language)
- Electives in 11th and 12th grade: Physics, Chemistry, Math, Computer Science, English (generally considered one of the most rigorous combinations offered at my school)
- APs (school doesnât offer any. I took all independently): Calc BC (5), Comp Sci A (5), Physics C E&M (5), Biology (5), Psychology (5), World History and English Language and Composition (will take after applications)
Awards
- Top 1% of all Indian 12th-grade ISC national exam givers; INSPIRE scholarship opportunity recipient
- AP Scholar with Distinction
- Recipient of CREST Gold award for independent STEM research on noise reduction algorithms
- Recipient of the School Medal for Waterloo Universityâs Euclid Mathematics Contest
Extracurriculars
- Founder of âSave a Life Initiativeâ; Organized 52 CPR training workshops in 20 villages, reaching 5500+ students & adults; Worked with local govt. officials; Led student participation
- Prototype Developer and Lead for IAP CPR App
Designed & coded the app to provide CPR training; funded by and recognized as Indian Academy of Pediatricâs (national medical NGO) national training module for laypersons & medics; 3K+ downloads in 2 months - Independently authored STEM research On comparison of spectral subtraction noise reduction algorithms; Published to Journal of Emerging Investigators; Presented at Sigma Xi International Conference; Received the British CREST Gold Award
- Conducted research for Indian Freedom Foundation (IFF) through Young Researchers for Social Impact Program (YRSI)
Surveyed 100+ respondents; shared insights & policy suggestions with IFF; won YRSIâs âBest Paper of the Yearâ - Co-founder and Member of schoolâs Philosophy Club
Explored inquiry through dialogue; Eastern vs Western philosophies, moral relativism, etc; 20 members; 15+ meetings; posted 10+ pieces on Inquisit, a blog I built for interdisciplinary exploration. - Intern under academician and author Dr. Jaijit Bhattacharya
Researched pre-colonial Indian linguistic advances for an academic book acknowledging itâs impact on global science & western knowledge - Training in Sitar, Indian classical instrument, as well as guitar
Under Girish Kambleâs training, performed 3 ragas on the Sitar; 10+ guitar solos & 25+ gigs as part of the school band - Long Distance Running
Ran 5 marathon events; ranked top 3 in school cross country x3; selected for world record Pangong Frozen Lake Marathon in Feb 2024 - High-Altitude Trekking
Completed 4 expeditions, surpassing an altitude of 18000 ft; the Himalayas have been my classroom for awe, resilience & humility, fostering my poise.
Essays/LORs/Other
- Common App Essay: I narrate one of my Sunday runs, exploring connection with the world outside, and internal dialogues of moral dilemmas, and the pursuit of self-improvement. Overarching metaphor of life as a long run. I feel quite confident in the quality of writing and the personal-ness (if you will) of the essay, having gained feedback from a variety of mentors.
- Iâm pretty confident in my LORs as Iâll be getting them from some of the most experienced and talented teachers I know. Being in a school like mine has also helped me garner strong personal connections with them.
Cost Constraints / Budget
- My budget is 45,000 USD per year.
- I will be applying for aid (with CSS) to most of my LACs (doesnât matter ofc for the need-blind ones)
Schools
Early Round (already applied)
- Amherst (ED)
- Macalester
- University of Richmond
- Case Western Reserve
- Lake Forest (Accepted with more than enough merit scholarship!)
- UMass Amherst
- Purdue
- Rutgers
- SUNY Buffalo
- UofT
- UBC
- McGill
- 2 safeties in Netherlands
- 2 safeties in India (home country)
Regular Round
- Vassar
- Grinnell
- Bowdoin
- Yale
- Dartmouth
- Swarthmore
- Pomona
- Wesleyan
- Colgate
- University of Rochester
Vassar v/s Grinnell. I need advice with my ED2, and that is the main purpose of this post.
Given that Iâm willing to pay 45K/yr (out of the total 80-90K), Iâm asking for an aid package less than the average aid package for both these schools (around 60K/yr for 50-60% of their students, which is HUGE).
Iâm drawn to Vassar. The Cognitive Science program (oldest in the world), itsâ location, campus, and its more artsy, bold, progressive campus environment and values. I would never regret ED Vassar.
Grinnell, on the other hand, is just as excellent on paper. But no Cognitive Science major (I can easily major/minor in related subjects. Not a dealbreaker). A little more quaint, quiet campus environment (I may be wrong) and rural campus.
On the plus side, Grinnell has almost 20% intl. students as compared to Vassarâs 9%. Stronger CS major. It fares marginally better with aid for international students. Most importantly, its ED acceptance is 50%!!
This is what is holding me back from a Vassar ED. Vassarâs ED acceptance is not far behind at 38% and Grinnell will be a little more competitive for CS I imagine.
(Note: I know the acceptance rates donât mean much for an intl. student with aid, but Iâm just looking at them just relative to each other!)
Given these factors, are chances of getting in with aid as an international student really that different at these colleges? Is that even a factor in my decision here? Grinnell is all good, more than I could ever ask for, but it doesnât excite me as much as Vassar. And this is ED, so should I hold onto that emotional factor?
Lastly, do chance me on these two colleges. Do you think I have the application and/or âvibeâ for these colleges?
I needed to rant. Please do share your advice and/or guide me towards resources/approaches to find out more regarding this decision.
Thank you so so much kind internet strangers!