At the verge

Pre-College Topics High School Life
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<p>About to fall, yet I don’t succumb.
About to drown, I don’t give in yet.
About to lose, I don’t submit until my last breath.
Always recalling that endeavoring can get me to my dream.</p>

<p>Rate my concise, nooby poem. 1-10.</p>

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<p>you make alooooooooooooot of threads.</p>

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<p>Ditto…</p>

<p>You do make a bunch of threads.</p>

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<p>Wow 174:41 post:thread ratio. I have like twice your posts, yet I have less threads.</p>

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<p>hpa, I remember that story you posted in here about you getting jumped from running at night. lol</p>

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0.5…yes, it was THAT bad.</p>

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<p>jesus…wow…I feel utterly despondent.</p>

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<p>You need to stop posting every thought you have as a thread. Seriously; we care a little bit, but we don’t care that much.</p>

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<p>Actually, I think ArtofMind_21 threads keep us all entertained. =)</p>

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<p>Errr the poem is a little emo, so to speak. Needs more imagery.</p>

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<p>do you want me to be honest? ur no poet. don’t try to force things. It reminds me of people like Lindsey Lohan’s little sister Ally who is trying to become a singer or whatever just because Lindsey was a very talented and at one point very successful entertainer. She’s trying to force a talent that she just doesn’t posess, kinda like you are.</p>

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<p>Anyone can write a “poem” like that. I’ve been in way too many AP English classes so I would know.</p>

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<p>Lmao, people, calm down, ArtofMind is just trying to entertain and express his thoughts…</p>

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<p>It needs more puns and allusions and stuff</p>

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<p>How do you even find these threads?</p>

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<p>I thought AOM was back for a minute.</p>

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<p>[High</a> School Life - College Confidential](<a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/high-school-life/?pp=20&sort=lastpost&order=asc&daysprune=546]High”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/high-school-life/?pp=20&sort=lastpost&order=asc&daysprune=546)</p>

<p>^^For example. If you go to the thing that comes after “daysprune” in the address bar, you can change the # of days or go through pages normally. There’s a lot of interesting stuff</p>

<p>^sry</p>

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<p>Thanks for the clarification!</p>

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<p>its not bad
i like the word succumb- it reminds me off the succumbus ;)</p>

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<p>Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
In Soviet Russia
Bad Poem Writes You</p>