Demographics
- US Citizen
- State/Location of residency: Virginia
- Type of high school (or current college for transfers): Poor Older Public High School (In very competitive district however) AND CTE Magnet School (Certified Nurses Aide program); 40/350 are accepted to this program.
- Other special factors: First Generation, Low Income
Cost Constraints / Budget
SAI: -1500
Intended Major(s)
Biology Pre-Med, Minor in Chemistry + Poli Sci (Maybe), Something in Music Performance, Something in Environmental Science
GPA, Rank, and Test Scores
- Unweighted HS GPA: 4.08 (District Calculated), 3.95 Actual
- Weighted HS GPA: 4.45/4.00; +0.5 for Honors, +1.0 for APs/DEs, “Real A+”; A+ = 4.3
- Class Rank: N/A
- SAT Scores: 1500
List your HS coursework
(Indicate advanced level, such as AP, IB, AICE, A-level, or college, courses as well as specifics in each subject)
- English: Honors Level 9-10; AP Lang; DE English 12 (ENG 111/112) (In progress)
- Math: (Pre Recs in Middle School) Algebra II, Pre-Calc, AP Calculus AB, AP Stats (In Progress)
- Science: Honors Biology, Honors Earth Science, Honors Chemistry + AP Biology DE; Self-studying for AP Environmental
- History and social studies: Honors 9th Grade, AP World, AP US History, AP Comp Gov (In Progress), AP US Gov (In Progress)
- Language other than English: French I-III
- Visual or performing arts: Band Honors (Dropped Senior Year due to personal reasons)
- Other academic courses: Certified Nurses Aide Class DE (Equals 3 Courses (In Progress))
Awards
- Questbridge Finalist I didnt end up matching
- Jefferson/Walentas Scholarship Nominee (Full Ride to UVA): Recognized for leadership, academic excellence, and community impact.
- Headhunted and awarded $3,000 grant/endowment for non-profit work and independent research
- Non-Profit Recognition: featured in local/school/regional/state news & radio
- Awarded $2,950 full scholarship for Stevens Institute Biomedical Engineering/Pre-Med Summer Program
- AP Scholar with Distinction
- Presidential Volunteer Service Award: Awarded through contributions in county park service
- Virginia Tech Honor Band: Performed in 1 of 4 bands, earned 4/15 chair, recognized for excellence
- 5 Honor Societies
Extracurriculars
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Founded Largest Conservation in my County; Head Director & Founder/Owner | Webmaster
Lead 160 members, organize 10+ cleanups, restoring 2182+ acres; collaborate/partners with 14 parks/schools, ~506,022+ impressions, educate with parks.
-Feature in Regional News
-Produce educational content on park etiquette, AI & environment, conservation, and invasive plant/animal removal; Supported Student Research
-Was Headhunted for a $3,000 Grant/Endowment
-Incorporated in Virginia & 501(c)(3)
-A lot of other things in Additional Information -
Medical Assistant Intern; Family Medicine Wellness; Family Medicine
Oversaw M.D. office, registered 100+ patients & maintained charts, recorded vital signs, assisted 20+ consultations, performed parts of physical exams
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Independent Research Study Author; Water Health
Lead 12-site 13-week study backed by 3 parks & grant, compile 504+ data points, analyze water health trends/ecology; publishing & presenting research. (I submitted my abstract to any school that would take it)
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Blood Donor Ambassador; Scheduling Team Admin; The American Red Cross; Blood Services
Recruit/schedule 30+ BDAs across 4 counties, coordinate check-in for 250+ donors, serve 5+ blood drives, promote Red Cross membership/blood donation
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Music Writer/Arranger | Member; Band/Music Program Collective (Marching, Concert, Pep, Jazz, Pit, Brass Band) | Musical Hobbies
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Founded Brass Band, Performed in 6 ensembles, play 5 instruments; mentored students across all ensembles, stirred musical interest
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Member of Marching Band, Pep Band, Jazz Band, Brass Band, Pit Orchestra, Wind Symphony (Honors Symphonic Band)
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Performed on Trumpet (Seven Years of Experience), Piano (Nine Years, Mellophone (Two Years), Percussion (Two Years), Traditional Khean (Five Years)
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Musical Arranger/Composer/Transcriber; writing 25 scores for Brass Band (compositions) & Pep/Marching Band (Stand tunes)—performed at 20+ football/basketball games, public appearances, etc; published writer, amassing 10,000+ views/streams & ~2,000 downloads.
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ASCAP Writer/Publisher
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Founder/Conductor of Brass Band
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President (2x) | School Musical Advocate; Modern Music Masters (TRI-M, Music Honor Society); Advocating for Music Education
Advocated for music education at school board, led 36 members & initiated musical volunteer events; increased music involvement, organized recitals
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Communications & Outreach Officer | Math Tutor; Mu Alpha Theta (Math Honor Society) | Personal Tutoring
Tutor 40+ students(Algebra 1–Calculus/SAT) in school; Online SAT Tutor, Tiktok—600K likes, 3.5M views; promote math outreach/literacy; organize meeting
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Clinical Radiology | CDU | Service Volunteer; Medical Center Volunteer
Volunteer in CDU, Radiology, & front desk; aid 30+ patients daily with wheelchairs & check-in; support M.Ds, R.Ns, etc; streamline patient intake
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Volunteer Caregiver | Food Bank Volunteer
Aide 8+ seniors with ADLs, cleaner; ensuring senior home cleanliness, strengthen hunger relief through food bank, engaging in social visits/errands
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Clinical Shadowing & Volunteer; Shadowed PT, PRN, RN, Radiology, CDU, and M.D.
Shadow 9+ healthcare professionals (PT, R.Ns, ARRTs, & M.Ds across 8 disciplines); assist with tasks in 15+ physical therapy sessions; gain experience
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Personal Filmmaking: Director, Cinematographer & Editor
Pursued film making, dedicating 800+ hours in directing, cinematography, & editing. Developed videography skills, garner recognition in the school newspaper, showcasing achievements in visual arts. Composed music for films. Co-founded a small film company, producing short films. Received 2.2M Views, 400K Likes on film Social Media
Extra ECs; I also had a lot of clubs which I will leave below
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All Honor Societies (They are service based)
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Math Club
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Key Club
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Thrift Club
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Parks Volunteering Program
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Youth Advisory Council Board member
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HOSA (We won first place out of 30 competitors; 9 teams; moved to State Competition)
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Green Team
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Technology Student Association
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Students for Cancer Research
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Full/Part Time job as host/server
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Depop Personal Business ($1000 Monthly Revenue before quitting)
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Virginia Tech Honor Band
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*>650 Volunteer Hours (This went into additional information)
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EMT & CMA (Starts Next Year over Summer)
Essays/LORs/Other
Counselor: Nothing to note, my brag sheet was solid. Has a fair impression of me
AP Biology DE Teacher: Had to work hard in her class, 17 years of teaching and only does ~8 LORs a year.
AP Lang Teacher: She loved me no debates, had an A+ in her class and said my college essay was incredible; Harvard Graduate.
Essays
Personal Statement: Talked about my musical journey; really solid essay and I am really happy how it turned out. Got feedback from like 9 of my teachers and 6 college students.
Claims
- Music is my creative platform
- I work past obstacles through pure effort
- Music is my platform for communication and organizing events (in school)
- Music is now my guiding notes in Medicine.
Supplemental: Solid all around; superior in some parts, spent about 300-500 hours writing supplemental
Schools
(List of colleges by your initial chance estimate; designate if applying ED/EA/RD; if unsure, leave them unclassified)
If a scholarship is necessary for affordability, indicate that you are aiming for a scholarship and use the scholarship chance to estimate it into the appropriate group below; also, for colleges that admit by major or division, consider that in chance estimate.
I honestly don’t know which school in my list would I get into. So I will leave plain text to most of the schools I applied to. I APPLIED TO A LOT BECAUSE I HAVE A FEE WAIVER
Common Application
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Virginia Commonwealth University
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Virginia Polytechnic Institute
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University of Maryland
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George Washington University
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William and Mary
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Case Western Reserve University
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University of Rochester
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University of Pittsburgh
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University of Virginia
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Emory University
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Georgia Institute of Technology
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Carnegie Mellon University
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University of Southern California
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Rice University
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University of North Carolina
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Cornell University
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Northwestern University
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Dartmouth College
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Columbia University
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Harvard University
Questbridge
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Boston College (QB RD)
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Boston University (QB RD)
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Grinnell College (QB RD)
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University of Pennsylvania (QB RD)
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Brown University (Did not Match
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Johns Hopkins University (Withdrew and submitted SCOIR) I felt my QB application was widely out of date
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Duke University (QB RD)
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Yale University (Did not Match
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Princeton University (QB RD)
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Stanford University (Did not Match
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California Institute of Technology (QB RD)
Coalition on SCOIR
Redacted a few schools since its ridiculous
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Vanderbilt University
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University of Notre Dame
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Claremont Mckenna College
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Washington University at St. Louis
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Swarthmore College
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Colby College
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Northeastern University
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Pomona College
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University of Chicago
I think I got a solid shot, but my district is insanely competitive. I really hope I can get into Harvard, that is my dream school. Realistically I know I can get into UVA (alongside the full ride I got an interview for).
The early BS/MD rejection and Gates rejection threw me for a loop but I hope that my decisions are a little more favorable.
Thank you and tell me what yall think