Demographics
- US Citizen
- State/Location of residency: Kansas
- Type of high school : Public high school, medium-sized
- Top-ranked public high school district
- No hooks (I think)
Cost Constraints / Budget
My parents are paying, but they would like to spend as little as possible but still are encouraging me to apply moderately.
Father works three jobs (he is a researcher, but also teaches part-time on the side at two programs), mother just started working, I’d feel terrible if I didn’t accomplish something for them :(( they work too hard for me to be mediocre.
Income was 90k in 2023
Intended Major(s)
Psychology, neuroscience, molecular biology, (basically cookie cutter pre-med majors)
GPA, Rank, and Test Scores
- Unweighted HS GPA: 3.88 (5 Bs in mathematics, upward trend nearing junior/senior year, I was afraid of asking for help from my parents, mom placed on furlough and my dad’s job was unstable at this time)
- Weighted HS GPA: 4.67 on a 5.0 scale
- Class Rank: N/A, school doesn’t rank
- ACT/SAT Scores: 34 ACT, no SAT
HS coursework
FR | SO | JR | SR (Plan) | |
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Math | H Geometry | H Algebra II | H Pre-Calculus and Trig | AP Calculus AB |
English | H English 9 | H English 10 | AP English Language & Composition | AP English Literature & Composition |
Science | H Biology | H Chemistry | AP Biology | AP Chemistry |
Social Studies | AP Human Geography | AP World History | AP Psychology | AP American Government |
Language | H Spanish II | H Spanish III | H Spanish IV | AP Spanish Language & Culture |
Elective | Drawing | Sociology | AP US History | Certified Nurse Aide Certification (can work towards college coursework) |
Elective | Software Development and Game Design | Design Fundamentals | AP Physics I | Certified Nurse Aide Certification (can work towards college coursework) |
Selected for my district’s first ever certified medical assistant certification class this upcoming semester
Extracurriculars
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Colorectal lead cancer research student at nationally recognized cancer center, wet-lab biology (had very high level of autonomy here)
*Research paper to be published soon, worked here for 2+ years -
Vice president of Amnesty International at school (3 years)
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Administrator at an after-school tutoring service, assigned students to tutors (4 years, was promoted 2 times)
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Healthfair organizer for Afghan refugees in my city, served as an Urdu-English translator (on-and-off, was performed when physicians were available, 1 year)
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Research student at a local branch of Veterans Affairs on pancreatic cancer research (3+ years)
*Published a review paper with professor in peer-reviewed journal with impact factor of 6 -
Editor at school’s Literary Magazine (2 years)
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Media Team Lead at my local mosque, creating high-fidelity education videos (1 year)
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Arabic calligrapher, this was really fun, raised around $7500 in charity through an auction with my pieces (2+ years)
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Student mentor for 6-12 students in STEM experiments and investigating pulmonary feedback to vape-based nicotine in underserved communities
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BPA student mentor
There is plenty more but this is just what I sent to my colleges through the Common App! (ex. volunteering experiences, shadowing, etc)
Awards/Honors
- Invited to present my research at the 3rd ranked university in India
- Published paper
- Student member at one of the leading cancer research organizations in the US, (I’ve also submitted an abstract to their convention for 2024)
- Top 15 Medical Coding Finalist at BPA Nationals
- National BPA qualifier for Healthcare Presentation 2x
- AP Scholar (lol)
Essay Breakdown
- Personal statement - I made it about gardening, I’m a first-generation immigrant and my grandfathers were subsistence farmers back in my home country. Made some nice connections between gardening and my ECs/passions, tied it back to continuing knowledge. Overall really proud of it, got it read by three teachers, who gave high remarks, plus my peers who were impressed
- Supplementals were all fine - definitely could’ve done better with Rice, but alas.
Essays/LORs/Other
- I think all my essays were pretty strong with the exception of Rice, I didn’t send in my teacher evaluations on time
: I think I’m gonna get rejected from there
- Worked with my English teachers and Gifted Ed teachers, alongside previous students from the UMKC & Case Western BSMD program for my personal statement
- LORs were my professor who I conducted my number 1 research with, a director of vascular medicine (who attended Case Western)
- Teacher eval/letter recs were my psychology and biology teachers, my psychology teacher definitely wrote a better one
Schools (all RD)
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Reaches:
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- Rice (couldn’t submit my teacher evals on time
- Rice (couldn’t submit my teacher evals on time
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- WashU
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- Emory
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- Case Western Reserve BSMD
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- UMKC 6-year BSMD
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- U Penn
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- Cornell
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- JHU
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- RPI 7-year physician-scientist program
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Targets:
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- Case Western Undergraduate
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Safeties: RPI Undergraduate, KU
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I would really like to cash in on my high school efforts and get into a BSMD program or one of my reaches :))
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Would kill to go to Case Western BSMD, Cleveland Clinic right across the street, dream come true.
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Biggest regret is not filling out Questbridge, I thought I wouldn’t be eligible based on financials. Filled out the FAFSA, looked at my household income, and realized I should’ve just done it lol.
Final remarks
I already have so many regrets, I don’t think I’m good enough for anything. So many of my peers are already accepted to amazing places. I’m so happy for them, just wish I could be celebrated like that.
Gosh, I just didn’t know anything about colleges going into this, just thought I was meant to end up at KU for the past 4 years, and never knew I could go anywhere else, it’s too late to lament now. I’m the first to ever apply to college here in the United States, (I’m the trial child)
Any feedback is greatly appreciated, please be brutally honest! Thank you in advance, you amazing people!