Demographics
- International student from Pakistan
- Semi-private Air Force-affiliated school
- Other special factors: none
Cost Constraints / Budget
I have an EFC of 10k for the COA (not including health insurance, visa costs, personal expenses, etc.)
Intended Major(s)
Linguistics, journalism, cognitive science
GPA, Rank, and Test Scores
- Unweighted HS GPA: 89%, 94%, 93% (9/10/11) National curriculum
- Class Rank: 1/188
- ACT/SAT Scores: 1440 (690 RW 750 M), 1450 (710 RW 740 M) → 1460 superscore
List your HS coursework
- Physics, Statistics, Computer Science, English, Urdu (lang), Pakistan Studies, Math, Chemistry, and religious studies.
- No AP/IB offered.
Awards
- 1st Place (out of 800 participants), Innovative Minds Creative Writing Competition
- Top 50 (44th out of 4,800), Honourable Mention, Pakistan Mathematics Olympiad
- Jinnah Fellow (1 of 5 Selected from 220+ Applicants), CERP Research Fellowship
- 3x National Merit Scholarship | High Achievers & Distinction in SSC Award
- 3x Winner (out of 38 teams), National Quiz Competition | Represented my school at the Capital
Extracurriculars (removed some details)
- Research Fellow at Centre of Economic Research in Pakistan (CERP) [11]
Applied quantitative methods & used STATA to research how education relates to maternal healthcare using PDHS; published findings in Evidence Matters - Computational Linguistics research w/ professor [11, 12]
Studied how Urdu-English language mixing affects 4 AI models using 1379 sentence pairs; preprint on SSRN and 3rd place at IYSJ research symposium - Writer and Lead Editorial Board Writer at an international org w/ 90+ members and 1060 readers/mo [10, 11, 12]
Authored 12 articles on AI ethics, philosophy, social justice, and media, garnering more than 6,000 views; co-authored 2 w/ editorial board - Editor on Wikipedia and open-source contributor on GitHub [9, 10, 11, 12]
Edited (incl. sourced claims, linked pages, fixed tone) 55 Wikipedia articles viewed 36,105 times; contributed to 7 open-source language projects on GitHub - Vice president → president, English Literature Club [9, 10]
Led weekly discussions; ran editorial process for school magazine (200+ copies sold); hosted zonal poetry and essay contests of up to 40 participants - Intern → Co-director at a national literary organization [11, 12]
Managed publishing schedules & deadlines; coordinated w/ 4 interns & other departments to publish 11 micro-essays. - Tutor and mentor for Paper Airplanes English Program [11, 12]
Adapted curriculum w/ original lesson plans & worksheets for teens from Sudan; taught weekly 1:1 sessions to improve English proficiency for IELTS - Computational Linguistics Courses from MIT OpenCourseWare, Harvard University, DeepLearning.AI [9, 10, 11, 12]
Completed Introduction to Linguistics, Miracles of Human Language, Natural Language Processing Specialization, Harvard CS50P for research and projects - Tour guide at World Wide Fund for Nature (WWF) Wetland Centre [10, 11]
Educated 1350+ students across 9 trips on wetland conservation via presentations; led 50-student mangrove trail tours and helped run center operations - Visual Effects (VFX) Editor and co-founder of a Discord community w/ 300+ editors [9, 10, 11, 12]
Self-taught in Adobe After Effects; posted 114 edits and 24 tutorials reaching 1mil views; managed collab projects w/ 4-11 editors
Essays/LORs/Other
- LOR: 9/10 from English teacher, 8/10 from my employer, 10/10 from my CS teacher.
- Common App Essay: I feel like it’s pretty decent! I wrote about editing and using it as a metaphor for my life.
Schools (early applications)
- ED Swarthmore (yes, I know I have an extremely low chance of getting in, but I’m taking a chance)
- Connecticut College
- Sewanee - The University of the South
- Brandeis University
- Oberlin College
- Macalester College
- DePauw University
- Colorado College
- Hobart and William Smith Colleges
- Gettysburg College
Should I ED somewhere else? Swarthmore has been my dream school for a while, and I know a lot of Pakistani students (personally) studying there.
I was thinking of applying ED to Haverford instead of Swarthmore, but I’m thinking of ED2 there.
Would colleges think I’m dumb since I only improved by 10 points in one year? I have a distinction in mathematics for a perfect 100/100 score in 11th grade, but I don’t know what happened on the SAT that I ended up losing 10 points on the math section. I want to give it again, but my midterms are in the way.