Broke HS Senior from Pakistan needs help shortlisting colleges [4.0 GPA, 1440, aiming for 1500+ SAT, <$10k]

Hello!! I know I’m committing a crime (as Reddit makes it seem) by applying for a full ride in the US as a Pakistani, but I want to try out my chances (dw, I have backups planned). I researched and gathered a list of all 62 colleges in the US that could offer me close to a full ride, but I’m having trouble shortlisting/cutting off colleges. I don’t want to apply to ivies/t20s because realistically my application isn’t that good, and I also prefer LACs. The location doesn’t matter to me.

Demographics

  • international student
  • Location of residency: Pakistan
  • Type of high school (or current college for transfers): Public (barely anyone applies abroad)
  • Other special factors: none

Cost Constraints / Budget
The absolute maximum my family can pay is around $7-10k, and I could work on-campus (if possible).

Intended Major(s): computational linguistics / linguistics / English

GPA, Rank, and Test Scores

  • Unweighted HS GPA: 93/100 ~ 4.0 (FBISE; hardest HS board in Pakistan after O/A levels)
  • Class Rank: 5/288 (this is only for 10th grade; my 11th grade rank is yet to be released)
  • ACT/SAT Scores: 1440 (750 M / 790 RW). I’ll be taking the October SAT, and I know I can get 1500+ (I got 1540 on my latest PT)

List your HS coursework

I took the standard FBISE courses, which included English, Math, Statistics, Computer Science, Chemistry, Physics, Language, and Religious Studies. (A1 grade in all). No Honors, APs, or IBs available at my school.

Awards:

  1. USACO Bronze (I’ll try next year for silver )
  2. T50 in National Math Olympiad out of 4800 participants.
  3. 3x Winner National Bowl/Quiz (represented my school)
  4. 2x Student of the Year
  5. 3x High Acheivers Award + State level Merit Scholarship
  6. Some hackathons, essay competitions, research competitions

Extracurriculars (just providing a summary)

  • Research Fellowship: I was 1 of the 5 fellows selected for a fully funded 5-week research fellowship at CERP, out of 200 shortlisted applicants. I worked on research (published) targeting a very niche issue in my country with a professor. Presented my findings to a panel that included Professors from Harvard, LSE, Stanford, Babson, etc. (11th)

  • Internship: YC-backed startup related to computational linguistics. (11th)

  • Fellowship: YC-backed startup related to computational linguistics. (12th)

  • Sort of a passion project: I worked on a project that got backed by WWF. (11th/12th)

  • Video Editor/Animator: I created video edits using motion graphics, visual effects, animation/tweening, and 3D elements in Adobe After Effects. I posted tutorials on how to edit and also built an online community on Discord. I got around 800k views across YouTube and Instagram over 5 years. (7th/8th/9th/10th/11th)

  • Independent Research: I conducted research in computational linguistics for a year. I was mentored by a grad student and a professor at the no. 1 university in my country. In the process of getting published. (11th/12th)

  • Independent Coursework: I’ve completed Harvard CS50 & CS50P (9th), Stanford’s Machine Learning specialization (10th/11th), MIT OCW’s Introduction to Linguistics and Introduction to Macro/Microeconomics (9th/10th/11th). I used all of these courses to help me in my projects/research.

  • GitHub contributor/Independent Projects: I’ve contributed to 3 open-source projects; I fine-tuned transformers for my first language, and I created a study planner for myself. I’ve created a lot of projects since I’ve been coding since 7th grade. (9th/10th/11th/12th)

  • Writer: I’ve written 12 articles on opinion, social justice, politics, AI, media, science, etc., which have gotten around 6k+ views. I’m a published writer for an international org, and also the IT lead for another journalism organization. (10th/11th/12th)

  • Community Service: I have ~140 volunteer hours from volunteering for causes I believe in at conferences, hospitals, different NGOs, and also a museum. I was also a lab assistant for my school. I am also a tutor on Schoolhouse. (10th/11th/12th)

  • Also, idk if this is an activity, but I live with my grandmother after she had an accident (like in her room), helping her with day-to-day tasks/medicines/walk, etc. (11th/12th)

Essays/LORs/Other
My LOR from my mentor would be a 10/10; she knows me very well, and I did 4 weeks of on-site research with her. My LOR from my English teacher would be a 9/10 (I was the top student in all the classes she taught, and she has known me for 2 years). The LORs from my counselor/headmistress would be a 7/10.
My PS is still in process.

Schools (I need help adding/cutting off)

  • Assured (100% chance of admission and affordability): NONE
  • Extremely Likely: Soka University of America
  • Likely: Georgia State, University of Miami, Clark University, Central Michigan
  • Toss-up: UT Dallas-McDermott, Miami-Ohio, UW-Madison, Case Western, Lehigh, Rochester
  • Lower Probability: Carleton, Davidson, Richmond, Hobart & William Smith, Skidmore, Oberlin, Whitman, Colby, Wellesley, Hamilton, Brandeis, Trinity, Macalester, Reed, Colorado College, Union, Connecticut College, Rollins, Gettysburg, Rhodes, Centre, Illinois Wesleyan, DePauw, Texas Christian, Thomas Aquinas
  • Low Probability: Washington & Lee (ED), Haverford, Pomona, Colgate, Middlebury, Bates, Holy Cross, Pitzer, Claremont McKenna, Barnard, WashU StL, Vassar, Scripps, Harvey Mudd. (maybe: Amherst, Williams, Duke, Bowdoin, Swarthmore)

I’m also thinking of applying to NYUAD, CMU Qatar, and Georgetown Qatar.

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Why are you still looking?

Something here is listed wrong

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That doesn’t mean that’s all a school will charge you - and required health insurance alone will be half of that.

Soka admitted 86 of 513 internationals. Not sure it’sextremely likely.

It’s very unlikely public schools will provide you substantive aid.

So easy to eliminate - UT Dallas, Miami, Wisconsin, etc.

I don’t see you getting into any of these at a rate you can afford.

Lehigh meets need but notes aid is limited - they admitted 176 of 4182 internationals and you can bet most are full pay.

Where would I apply on your list - W&L and you can pick a few.

But go through the CDS - and you’ll see most won’t consider an international at high discount. Bowdoin is another that will.

PS - see if Whitman will look at your finances and give you a pre read. They do for US students. Whitman admitted 253 of 3265 internationals last year. They’re closer to 75% on domestic students.

That’s the challenge you face.

I wish you luck but I don’t see budget achieving happening here.

What do you mean by that?

oh yes!! It’s 1440 (750 M / 690 RW)

Yes, I understand. The budget that I mentioned would be directly for the University tution/housing; it does not include health insurance, visa costs, application costs, flights, or other misc. expenses.

I just checked, and you are right. I was using this spreadsheet of ZeroEFC colleges, and it mentioned that Soka accepted 102 out of 161 international applications. My bad for using outdated numbers (from 2023).

I know, but the ones in my list had merit scholarships covering everything, or could be stacked.
UT Dallas - McDermott Scholars Program
Georgia State University - Stamps and Presidential Scholarships
University of Wisconsin-Madison - King-Morgridge Scholars Program (I know someone from my area who got this with a lower EFC)
Miami University (Ohio) - King-Morgridge Scholars Program
Central Michigan University - Centralis Scholar Award

Thanks for the advice! I’ll go through the CDS of all these schools. I’ll remove Lehigh and some state schools from my list and keep W&L and Bowdoin.

While your level of achievement is very good, the chances of acceptance and a full ride (which is essentially what you need) are extremely small. You really also need to make options in your home country, that you can afford.

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Thanks for showing me new things. I can’t imagine you’d win but Central Michigan is the type of school where you’ll stand above the average.

You’ve done great research here.

Best of luck.

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What are your post-graduation plans, and have you considered how the colleges you’re looking at will fit into those plans beyond affordability?

If you hope to stay in the US after graduation, keep in mind that you’ll need employer sponsorship, which can be quite difficult to secure with a linguistics or English bachelor’s degree. More broadly, immigration into the US is getting harder, not easier.

So I encourage you to think about how a US degree will meet your career goals back in Pakistan as it’s highly probable that you’ll return to your home country after graduation.

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@Ashmaan – how did you come up w/ your initial list?

I asked Google Gemini, “list school with high Acceptance Rate (Over 20% Int’l Admit Rate) and generous financial aid for international students” and it gave me:

It also recommended these “high-acceptance universities (50%–80%) that offer competitive or automatic full-ride / full-tuition merit scholarships to international students.”

  • University of Alabama
  • University of Texas at Dallas (UT Dallas)
  • Michigan State University
  • Berea College

FWIW/FYI/HTH

I find this interesting, as well as naive because LOCATION is an issue if you are on a very limited budget.

Some US universities, which are trying to entice students to attend, are in very rural areas. Some are in towns where the transit options are limited and you would need to travel into the nearest town which can add significantly to your transportation expenses.
There are areas on the East coast that require winterizing your wardrobe.
Winter coats, gloves, hats and bedding become very important purchases.

As a student on a student Visa, you are limited to work on-campus for very limited hours. If you can find a job on campus, the income from an on-campus job is meant for your minor spending money (laundry soap, toiletries, daily living minor expenses). It is not meant to supplement your tuition and fees.

Yes, the internet video tours tend to shoot the best shots, when providing school promos. It makes the schools look attractive. If you plan on applying to a large portion of 62 schools, there will be a reason why these schools will offer you scholarship money to attend.
I will echo @DadOfJerseyGirl, please check your home options for future employment options. The US is not in dire need of linguistics and English majors, hence, sponsorship for a non-domestic candidate, by a US employer, does not look promising.

Bowdoin’s acceptance rate for ALL international students (regardless of whether they need aid) is 1.4%.

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Yes, very very low but need blind for international.
But you can be rest assured the ones not need blind are looking for big payers.

It’s likely those big payers are the ones with the connections and wherewithal opportunity wise to get into a Bowdoin. W&L would be similar - in the need blind and has the Johnson - but i wouldn’t expect an acceptance to either, especially given the SAT score. But statistically, as you noted, not going to happen regardless.

But if you don’t try i suppose…

It’s a double-edged sword. The LACs that are need-blind for internationals (Amherst, Bowdoin, W&L) don’t factor need into admissions decisions, but that significantly drives up applications, greatly reducing one’s chance of admission, even for highly qualified students. It’s a low-risk, high-reward tactic that wealthier colleges will need to consider if they want to continue driving up application numbers.

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Yes, the US is my top choice right now, but I have backups in my home country and also in Canada and France, where my relatives would be willing to sponsor me.

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I’m still figuring out the exact career I want after graduation, but I’m most interested in the intersection of AI and language.

I don’t plan to stay in the US after graduation, given the current administration, but I’d still like to keep the option of working in the US open if the right opportunity exists.

I found a spreadsheet (Public - BGZ International Admissions & Scholarship Database) online of almost all the colleges in the US sorted by COA, aid, scholarships, rank, international acceptance rates, etc. It had around 41 zero EFC colleges and, in total, 679 colleges. I went through all of them and then selected the colleges (around 62) that fit my criteria. Looking back, I’d def say I didn’t research them that well since I’ve gotten to know some very obvious red flags. I was mainly stuck on which factors to focus on since the spreadsheet includes:
Total cost of attendance without aid
Types of Aid for international students
Number of international students awarded financial aid/scholarships
Percentage of International students who receive aid
Average amount awarded
Average cost after aid (merit or need)
Total awarded in millions
Meets full demonstrated need?
Amount of largest merit scholarship

Yes, aside from St. Olaf College (since it mainly accepts students from UWC), the colleges that Gemini suggests fits well with my criteria, and I’d add them to my list. I didn’t use AI before since I had a pretty bad experience with ChatGPT helping me with my college list; I’ll take help from Gemini now.

  • University of Alabama - COA after scholarship (for which you need a 1600 SAT) would be 17k.
  • University of Texas at Dallas (UT Dallas) - on my list
  • Michigan State University - COA after scholarship is 35k.
  • Berea College - insanely competitive, with an international admissions rate of less than 5%

Well, I admit my mistake because I never considered the location like this. I’ll factor in the location when creating my final list.

Yes, it’ll only be for personal expenses. After talking with some current international students at the colleges I’m considering, if you get an on-campus job and you work around 20 hours/week, you could earn a minimum of 800 USD per month after taxes.

Yes, I understand!! I think there may be an impression that I’ll be pursuing a US degree as a pathway to immigrate to the US (I don’t blame anyone since most of the students from Pak/India do this). I’m interested in the education; that’s it. Yes, being honest, I wouldn’t say no to an offer to work in the US, but that does not mean that’s my only goal. My goal right now is to get the best education I can, whether that’s in my own country, the US, etc.

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AFAIK Soka mostly admits students from their own religious group.

“Meet need” colleges do include the need for a winter wardrobe in their estimation of need and subsequent financial aid package.

The key factors are going to be what you bring the University, how you fit institutional needs.
The fact you want to major in English matters because 1/there’s no better place to major in English than in an English-speaking country, although it’s different from studying English in another country since everyone is assumed to be a native speaker; as a result, you may want to see if the college offers a way for you to take an advanced translation course based on your native language(s). But anyway, it automatically makes sense. 2/fewer students apply for English, especially from Pakistan where many apply for STEM majors. So it helps them (they want a diversity of majors) and it helps you (because you’re not the 204th international stem applicant - I get that you’d have math/tech-related minors too.)

But beyond that, what can you do for them?
Before they decide whether they need to spend hundreds of thousands dollars on you, you need to be able to answer this question.

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